
A young Donald Trump, eager to make his name as a hungry scion of a wealthy family in 1970s New York, comes under the spell of Roy Cohn, the cutthroat attorney who would help create the Donald Trump we know today. Cohn sees in Trump the perfect protégé—someone with raw ambition, a hunger for success, and a willingness to do whatever it takes to win.
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Pacing Verdict
The screenplay maintains strong narrative momentum through its rise-and-fall structure, with Roy Cohn's mentorship and Donald's ascent creating effective forward drive. However, the middle act (scenes 21-77) occasionally drags with repetitive power dynamics and montage sequences that dilute tension, while the final act feels rushed as it compresses Roy's decline, Donald's marital breakdown, and his physical transformation into a few brief scenes. The dialogue is sharp and rhythmic, but some transitional scenes (like the Aspen courtship) could be tightened to improve overall energy management.
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